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Friday, August 31, 2007
Thoughts after writing first draft
After writing my first draft for this class I feel that I did well in certain areas and in others I could of used a little more improvement. I was a little confused as to where to start with this draft because I knew that you wanted a personal narrative that dealt with language but I didn't know what angle I should start from. I also feel that I wrote too much, but yet I was struggling with my body of the paper. I had trouble deciding what I wanted to say when and where. I think the thing that I like most about my first draft is that it is personal because it was about something that I have dealt with all my life. Overall, I think that my first draft turned out pretty well.
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