project status

I feel like I am on a good pace with my paper. I think that the research that I put in to my project is really helping me out. There was a good portion of this information that I was aware of. With what I had already known, the most recent information that I will use has some interesting facts on insurance sales and the main points staying consistant. I honestly feel like I am on a good pace to be ready to earn a good grade.

Paper #3 Progress

I have read all the teacher comments on my first rough draft, and trasfered the correction to my paper. I have written a full rough draft and am currently doing another peer evaluation. I plan on finishing my final draft this week, tho there is still some things I want to research and maybe change or add to my paper.

Progress On 3

I am working on my paper for monday, I need to restructure my paper so that it will focus more so on the how my discourse works and not so much on the what. Also I have attempted to work on my annotated bibliography but my efforts have not been promising. This assignment has proved to be a challenging one, interesting but putting it all together is different

Progess

I have made good progress since my rough draft. I really started to add quotes from people already involved in the law field to back up my observations on the language of law. I focused on the elaboration of each idea and explaining why people in my field communicate the way they do. I need to gather at least 2 more sources to fit the requirment for the bibliography. This paper has proved to be challenging since I am still very far away from being a true member of this discourse community.

#3

I've looked over the comments made about my rough draft and need to fix my paper's structrure. I need to also stop focusing on what teachers teach and more look at how they discourse.

I am working on correcting the things that you suggested for project number 3. I am in the middle of my bibliography. I still need to go back and revise my paper once more before I turn it in.

Progress on Paper #3

So far, I have reviewed your comments on my rough draft and have begun to re-arrange some elements of my paper. I am almost finished, but could use to go back and add some connecting sentences between sources and my personal information.

Progress on Project #3

As of the moment I am currently in the process of finishing my final draft for project 3 which will be turned in on Monday. I have been utilizing websites and some other book sources for citation and the annotated bibliography. So far the essay's rough draft has been completed and criticized and ready for editing. The sources that I have chosen to use for this essay relate to subject matter that pertains to my chosen career field and have been cited appropriately in the essay. Overall the progress of my essay has been completing the rough draft and preparing for the final essay.

Project #3 update

I feel that I am doing well with my project. I am not sure that I will be 100% perfect for my draft that I will hand in on Monday, however I feel that if I keep revising my document under your amplified comments, I will be where I want to be. The only question that I have is when are your hours that you are available on the weekend?

Essay #3 progress

On my essay #3 I am working on shifting my thoughts more towards on how event planners communicate. I am just working on trying to focus my essay bettter, trying to focus on the comuncation aspects rather than the job itself. I was having difficylty at first but feel I have a better grasp on where my paper should go. I am still trying to find one last good source, but I think I am on my way to finishing my final sucussfuly.

Essay #3

I completed my revisions for essay 3 last night so I'm all done. I worked on completing the bibliography but I might want to make some changes to that between now and then, not sure about it.

Progress Report: Friday, Oct. 19

In a paragraph, discuss your progress thus far in Project #3. Keeping in mind the final draft is due on Monday, what do you know you need to do between now and Monday morning? Furthermore, what questions do you have?

--ejfleitz