Wednesday's Response

I feel that I learned alot from my peers (whether if they were in my group or online). As I reviewed the posts online I felt that there were some that were too brief that needed some editing, and others that had really good amplified language in discribing the definition to the public. Even though some people feel that it's easier to add than to create a new blog, I feel that you are being inventing than learning about the material just like what we reviewed on Monday. Another thing to consider is that by Adding new terms to the blog you are further educating the world on how the world operates, but with new additions to old terms you are not really educating the world. The reason is because more people are more likely to know about old term and how they work (even if the analysis are posted or not), where as new terms are more likely to help society in there future career goals. I feel that by reviewing my Essay #4 with you, I will get even more closer to where I want to be for my report.

Oct/30/2007

I learned a lot by reading up on outside websites that had information on it about insuln pump thearpy. This has helped me to revise my essay more. Insulin pump therapy is more of a treatment for diabetes to children, young persons and adults. The more you know the better you can write your essay. I would recommend using as many outside sources as possible.

Wednesday Wikipedia Post

Although I am not editing an existing page, I did look at page that is comparable to what I will post. From the history, I learned that it is very important that I create headings to divide up the information on the page. I also found out that it is very important to fully explain all aspects of the court case that I post. A lot of people who get onto Wikipedia are unaware of the details that go into certain cases. I need to make my post clear so that anyone can read it and understand what was said.

wikipeida search on event planning

I went to the "talk" page for event planning and i found that a few other people posted and have been looking for information on how event planning started. I havent found much research on that but i think i will try to look harder for some. One person mentioned using software as a section, but another person responded how that is not unversal for everyone and that is not what event planning is about, it is about communcation and actual planning of the event. I think that i will not focus on the software aspect of it, but in the entry i will focus more on the aspect of planning event and skills that one would need to be in this profession. There was not much on the talk page so i think i will go mostly from what research i have found and what seems to be important in the event planning career field.

Wednesday-Wikipedia

When searching my history and discussion page on wikipedia I noted several findings about the achievement gap. My Article was first dated back to October 2004 and last edited October 18, 2007. Something that I found interesting on the discussion page was the main person who created this entry wants to create a debate with both sides of the argument on whether anything is being done to close the achievement gap. This person believes that some have no interest to close the gap while others do. In my essay #4, I came up with strategies that people can use to close the gap and in my findings everyone was discussing how important it is to close the gap. I think that I can help to contribute to this entry by giving the side of how to close the gap/why it's important to do so.