About My Draft

Wow,...I completed my first draft unsure about if I had grasped the concept of "my language/narration of" but after recieving feedback, I was able to focus my essay more and have a better understanding of the essay's expectations. My second draft, the one I submitted, was more focused but short and undevelped. I put great effort and thought into my paper and expect great things from it in the end but Im aware of work that needs to be done such as expansion and development.