Self-Evaluation of Essay 1

The first essay that we are working on in class right now is a narrative of the language rhetoric that we have used on a particular situation. My general thoughts of my essay are kind but, critical. I felt my intro was effective and the beginning paragraph set up the format for the rest of the paper. The body was at some times more focused on communication than on language rhetoric but, I felt the examples as well as situation that I chose to write about was original and informative about my language. I still believe that language and communication are very connected and I saw that in most of the essay. I will probably use a citation in the final draft and maybe change some of the content though.