Friday, August 31, 2007
Essay 1
Writing the rough draft proved to be more challenging than I thought it would be. I have a descent thesis statement which could use some revision. The points are strong, but I need to tie them in more to examples given from the readings. I tried to show the struggles that I had with another language and relate them to the readings. I hope there is a strong enough comparison.
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remember, only use the readings as examples if they really will help you tell your story or explain it. Using the readings may not be necessary, but sometimes bringing them in to help explain your story (as part of the analysis) can help. But use them sparingly.
--Elizabeth
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