I think that my draft is progressing very well, but still needs some revision before the final copy. I would like to make my introduction more interesting by adding an anecdote about struggles between the North and South, or perhaps a quote about such differences. I also need to relate my personal narrative with the articles from class. I feel that I my work up until this point has provided a strong foundation for my paper; I will be fine-tuning my language and expanding my examples for my final draft.
Danni Boyd
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